mine and my peers evaluation

my evaluation
I thought the genre was clear and the music made it even more clear as most people know where that songs from but it did make it sound more like a comedy then a detctive drama. i thought the script was to short and it would have made it better if i knew my lines overal i thought it was good.

1. I worked with lee hart and max gridley which was really good because i know them both well, we worked really well with each other by sharing and listening to each others ideas.
How did you plan your sequence? What processes did you use? What theories did you try to take in to account?
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